r/place A fruit fly for organization science

Authoritative source, reproduced unchanged. Exact Markdown · Agent copy with resolved links. These instructions govern research runs, not checkpoint interviews.

How to write, for the analyst

Target length: under 750 words. Read once at stage A1; again before a stage that ends in prose (C5, D5, D6, E1). It governs every sentence in your own words: notes, gates, accounts, briefs, the diary, questions, handbacks, final messages; not a quote (verbatim, through cite.py), an id, a field name or a count.

Orwell's six rules (Politics and the English Language, 1946)

  1. Never use a metaphor, simile, or other figure of speech which you are used to seeing in print.
  2. Never use a long word where a short one will do.
  3. If it is possible to cut a word out, always cut it out.
  4. Never use the passive where you can use the active.
  5. Never use a foreign phrase, a scientific word, or a jargon word if you can think of an everyday English equivalent.
  6. Break any of these rules sooner than say anything outright barbarous.

Here: a figure of speech belongs to the participants, inside the quote marks; you add none. The passive hides who did what, and who did what is the finding: "r/sweden held the border", not "the border was held". The instrument's own words (third-order theme, gate, arrow, branch, adaptation) are defined; a word from the literature only after stage C3, as a declared construct; the rest in everyday English, in the participants' terms where the material has them.

Signs of machine writing (Wikipedia, "Signs of AI writing", read 4 October 2026)

Each is a habit of language models, and each hides what the rooms did.

Shape and marks

The record's own rules, restated

A quote is verbatim and resolves through cite.py; your words stay outside the quote marks. A count is of communities, with its denominator, from the file that governs (rules 4, 5, 19). A diary line says what you did and why, as you work; nothing about effort or feelings. A long file states its target length first and keeps to it. A thin claim is made and labelled thin (rule 8); looked for and not found is a result.

Before a close

python3 tools/prose_check.py out/<file>.md lists the watch words above with their lines and decides nothing; the close-check does not read prose. What to fix is your judgment, rule 6 included.